Hello hiiii how R U all guys ???missed me ??
In fact kiya hoga ? I am so happy that u like my ff twinj Rab miliya n that comments made me cry itne cute comments paglo rulaoge kya
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Thank to all of u guys for ur love n support keep supporting
N thanks to all who commented on intro also I hope u all will like this too
U know guys I wrote this epi 2 times n got deleted now I hope this epi post soon
Love u all soooooo much
Now no more bak bak let’s us begin
Lights camera action
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The episode starts with the scenario of Amritsar
The cool weather the breeze green lands trafficking roads the scene shifts to gurudwara
A Girl is shown wearing a cute pink frock of nearly 5 years old comes in gurudwara running she has chocolate in hand she was running when her mother from behind ask her to not run so fast
Leela : twinkle beta don’t run so fast
The lady is revealed to be leela n the girl is none other than our Punjabi pathaka she turns n looks at leela
Twi : ofoo mumma don’t worry
Leela : I am going inside u stand here n dont go anywhere else
Twi : ok mumma I’ll stand here only
Leela hugs her n went inside while Twi stays outside eating her chocolate when a cute lil boy of nearly 6 years comes there running n collides with Twi he turns n sees Twi
Twi makes crying face n looks at her chocolate which has fallen down the boy looks on n says plshh don’t cry (he is revealed to be our kunj )
Twi : my chocolate she says n makes a crying face
Kunj : hey plshh don’t cry take my chocolate but plshh don’t cry na
Twi : if I take ur chocolate then what u will eat ??
Kunj stays silent n twi says ok we will share this chocolate….
Kunj : but who can we share chocolate
Twi : offo won’t worry we will share it
Kunj says ok n they went near Amritsar sativa lake but in between kunj sees jasmin flowers he picks up one n gives it to twi
Kunj : sorry becoz of me ur chocolate take this flower
Twi : oh don’t worry but this flower so cute see it’s smell
Kunj : yeah it’s jasmin flowers but u r also as cute as this flower but what’s ur name
Twi : my name is Twi ………
Kunj : u r like this jasmin flowers so I’ll call u jasmin
Twi : wow jasmin cute name what’s ur name ??
Kunj : my name is sid …..
Twi : wow nice FRIENDS ???
Kunj : yeah friends
They both talk near Amrit sarovar lake sharing the chocolate n our cute twinj was enjoying each other company they make fun of many people n laughs
Suddenly a boy throws ball and it hits kunj
Twinj stands up n looks at the fat boy n stares at the boy (bunty)
Twi : say him sorry she says angrily
Kunj : leave it na jasmin
Twi : no sid u stay quiet I said say him sorry
Kunj : but Twi he gets interrupted by bunty
Bunty : huh I will not what u will do piddi chuhiya (lil rat)
Kunj : how dare u called her rat
Twi : say him sorry or else
Bunty : or else eat u lil rat
Twinkle gets angry n punches him hard on his face while kunj looks onn shocked
On the other side
Leela was praying when she collides with usha
Leela : I am sor…she says quiet seeing usha
Usha : well as I expected u tanejas had not habbit of apologizing
Leela : what to do Mrs sarna we know whom to apologize n whom to not
Usha : well I don’t want ur apology we sarnas will not have any relation with u
Leela : as if we r dying to make relation with u tanejas n sarnas will not have any relation
They both part away ……..
At twinj side
Bunty : I am so sorry he has n runs from there
Twi turns to kunj who was shocked n says these type of boy will understand by fighting only
Kunj smiles n looks at Twi they both say
Twinj :ohh mumma will be waiting for us
Kunj : we r friends we will meet again
Twi : yeah
They both were going when they sees a couple joining their names
Twi : what is this Sid
Kunj : I think they r friends so they r going their names
Twi : we r friends also we will join our names too
Kunj : yeah nice idea sid+ jasmin =???
Twi : sid+jasmin =jassid
Kunj : no yaar sid+jasmin= SIDMIN
Twi : wow yaar sidmin is cute
They both hi-fi each other n says we r sidmin from now onwards saying this they both went towards their mothers
Screen freezes
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So guys how was this epi ???
Share ur views
Do comment
What happen between tanejas m sarnas that they both hate each other ???
N yeah I need suggestions too whether I should show sidmin childhood or should take a leap directly???
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28 responses to “ISHQ FOREVER TWINJ episode 1”
Sameera Loved it and my suggestion is that you should show SidMin’s childhood like their cute talks and childish fights and then making it up for each other and then take a leep its just my suggestion the rest is upto you
Loved the episode and their joining the names vala part was so cute Loved it 🙂 Love you 🙂
Hey
Nice one
TWINJ scene is cute
Awesome di..really missed u..n the epi was toh amazing..loved it..plzz post next asap..n i think u can show that twinkle n kunj goes some places related to their childhood n then show some fbs..n then the rest is upon u..but loved it..love u losds…muah!!
Wow sameera di !!!!
So so cute!!!!!!!!!!
Omg loved these small sidmin so cute?????
Loved it to the core
Plzz post the next one soon
awesome episode ……sameera……….nice start …plz post asap….love u
awesome amazing cute epi….loved it…..
Awesome start sameera…my suggestion is that you have to show SidMin’s childhood and then take a leap no need to hurry up…sameera your ff dp is fab awwww chotu sa Sidhant Gupta toh????❤❤
Awww!! Abhi itne cute lagte hain!!! Bachpan mein raste mein chalte logon ko diabetes hui hongi?
Amazing! Very excited to know ki hatred ke aag mein pyaar ka phool kaise khilega….
smaeera di amazing as always u r here wid a bang luvd it 2 d core osm di its ur choice i thnk jst in d past u cn show how dey r parted n den d leap n also in past dat how dere is fyt btw tanejas n sarnas bt di its ur stry n i m no1 to say anything i dont even no how to ryt di post nxt asap luv u di osm episode marvalleous fab n w8ing fr nxt
Wow such a cute epi.. awesome amazing.. really loved it.. lil cute sidmin ??.. was literally imagining real lil sid ??.. umm.. I would suggest you to show sidmin’s cute childhood and then take a leap.. rest is up to you.. do cont soon ?
nice one
plz take a leap
and then shows the fbs …..
well it my idea
Well fo your best 🙂 😉 <3
Awwwwww so so cute di it was so cute
And hope the story to get posted soon
Awesome sam..loved it..byw i like the dp more..sid is looking soo cute in that
Awesome
Plz show their childhood and why kunj doesn’t told his real name KUNJ …. but SID … and u r an awesome writer keep writing ….
amazing awsome fabulous
awesome part
loved their childish talks and all
everything is your choice but I want a leap
it was so so cute…cuteness se bhara hua episode…loved it…I prefer childhood first…it is so cute…
Sam this was such a cute epi …..loved it
U can show the childhood if u want to…..i think it would b nice if u show it
Sam phad dala… Osum.. Chumeshwari.. Lovely.. Ctd soon darlo
Sammmmmm missed u???
U am happy u r back in a gap of 1 day i guesss????????????????????????????
Loved it plz upload next part soon ?
Awesome
Sam yrr what a cute episode… Loved it.. Awesome… Amazing…
Plz show their childhood scene’s plz as it will be great experience to imagine Twinj as Sidmin in their childhood….
Ur dp is too cute…. Lovely…
Post next one soon…
Love u ????
Wow… Such a cute epi..
Looved it..❤❤
That name joining part was soo sweet…
SIDMIN❤❤??
It was so cute, baby twinj ? Loved it! Continue soon x
sry i m late sam…u return wid a bang…
so swt…n yes u can show how they parted…n take a leap…u can show tashan infront of family n chupchupke pyaar behind…its up 2 u…post nxt asap…
Awww Sam that was Superb
Plzzz continue asap
I can’t wait
Love u dear
N it is really is great comeback❤❤
Wow….sameera episode was so cute…..adorable Sidmin….