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Nakchadi Ch 2 (SwaRagini)

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Hello Guys. I think most of the readers are confused with the title. Let me clear you. Nakchadi had different meaning in Hindi. Like it means girl with attitude or a girl who rubs her nose always as a habit whenever she gets angry or a girl who is short tempered. In my ff it is a girl who rubs her nose always she gets angry. It doesnt have any deep meaning. It is just kind of pet name
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β€œLado. Get up beta. You told me to wake you up early na. Today is your first day at office. You wanted to go to Mandir also” said Supriya entering Ragini’s room. β€œMaa Please. Just 5 minutes” said Ragini pouting and hugging her pillow. β€œHey bhagwan yeh ladki bhi na” said Supriya arranging her table which was messed up. β€œWhy you irritate me everyday when I want to wake you” said Supriya sitting beside her on bed. She dragged Ragini and made her sit. β€œMaa” screamed Ragini. β€œWhat happened maa?” asked Ranjit entering Ragini’s room. β€œDekh na. She is irritating me. She only said to wake her up and now doing so much nakhra. On top of that she is screaming” said Supriya still holding Ragini with her hands. Ragini was sitting closing her eyes and pouting and a spit drop was escaping her lip. And her hair was fully messed up. Ragini bent her hand from her mom’s hold and rubbed her nose. Ranjit looked at her and burst out laughing. β€œRanju” said Supriya glaring him. β€œLook at her how cute she is looking” said Ranjit and sat on the bed.

He held her nose and shook it left and right. β€œBhai” screamed Ragini still closing her hand. β€œOuch badi maa. Why is she screaming?” said Ravi entering Ragini’s room rubbing his ears. He looked at Ragini and burst out laughing holding his stomach. β€œYeh chidiya ka ghosla kahase ban gaya iss nakchadi ke sar pe( From where did this bird nest came on this girl’s head). Oye hoye. Its crow nest” said Ravi laughing. Ranjit laughed more and both of them gave high five. β€œKya hua badi maa” said Nikit entering rubbing his eyes. Supriya who was glaring Ravi and Ranjit looked at door and found Nikit. β€œHey Bhagwan. Everybody got up in the process of waking this Kumbkaran. Ladoo ab to ut jaa” said Supriya shaking Ragini. Ragini smiled with closed eyes like she got some chocolate. Ravi and Ranjit winked at each other and got up from the bed. They both screamed in Ragini’s ear β€œLadooo. Chipkali tere bed pe”.

Ragini opened her eyes with jerk and stood up immediately and started jumping on the bed screaming β€œMaa chipkali… chipkali… Bachavo…. Bachavo….” Supriya stood up and hit her head with her palm looking at jumping Ragini and laughing Ranjit and Ravi. Nikit clapped his hands and laughed looking at Ragini. β€œKya hua” said Simi entering Ragini’s room. Ragini jumped from bed to ground and ran to Simi and jumped behind her hiding and screaming β€œChachi chipkali” Ranjit suddenly controlled his laugh and became serious and said β€œLadoo. How can you call chachi as chipkali. Bad manners. This is what you give her for her love. Very bad” Simi looked at Ragini confused. β€œNo. Chachi. Chipkali….” before Ragini could complete Ravi screamed β€œBas Lado bas. I cannot hear more about maa. What if she looks like one but you have no rights to call her chipkali okay” and acted like he is Dileep Kumar. β€œNahi chachi chipkali…” said Ragini and this time Nikit stopped her and said β€œBas Ragu di bas.

One more time you called my maa chipkali. Ap uthoge nahi uth javoge” He showed his index finger like he is Sunny Deol and bit his lower lip with full on attitude. Simi was looking at all of them confused. β€œChup karo nalayako( shut up useless people) screamed Rajesh (played by Suraj Thapar; He is one of my fav actor in television. Lovable) entering the room. All the boys lowered their head. β€œChachu” cried Ragini ran hugged Rajesh. β€œGudiya what happened beta?” asked Rajesh cupping her face. β€œChachu chipkali….” said Ragini and was again Ravi interrupted β€œLadoo gender, gender beta. Papa is not chipkali he is chipkala” Everyone gave him weird look. β€œShut up Nalayak” said Rajesh and he turned to Ragini and said β€œYou continue bacha” Ragini sobbed and said β€œChachu mere bed pe chipkali hai” Rajesh glared Ravi and Ranjit as he understood it was their prank. They both lowered their head and bit the nails of their fingers nervous.

Rajesh caressed Ragini’s hair and said β€œGudiya. Kuch nahi hai beta. Dekh. We had done pest control last week only na. There are no chipkala… I mean chipkalis in the house” Everybody controlled their laugh for Rajesh tongue slip. β€œSachi?” asked Ragini innocently. β€œMuchi” said Rajesh caressing her cheek. β€œChachu that means these people fooled me?” said Ragini and started crying like a small kid. β€œAwwww mela bacha. You just wait. I will teach them a lesson” said Rajesh consoling her. Before he could look them all of them ran out of the room. β€œWhere are they?” said Rajesh looking around. β€œBhag gaye” said Supriya controlling her laugh. β€œMera shona bacha. We will see them later. Now you get ready. Mandir jaana hai na. Pandit ji will be waiting” said Rajesh cupping Ragini’s face. β€œOk Chachu” said Ragini like a kid and headed to her wash room. Supriya nodded her head in disbelief. Simi headed to kitchen smiling. β€œOnly you can cool her” said Supriya caressing Rajesh’s hair. He smiled at her and side hugged her.
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β€œHas he woken up?” asked Sanjay to Sunita who was helping him with his tie. She nodded her head. β€œEveryday same story, will he ever wake up early in the morning?” asked Sanjay irritated. β€œSanjay. Relax” said Sunita cupping his face. He smiled at her and kissed her cheek. β€œSanjay….” screamed Sunita rubbing her cheek and glaring him. β€œWhat? You are my officially wedded wife” said Sanjay resting his hand on her shoulder. β€œLook at your age? Dada banne ki umar me romance kar rahe ho( In the age of becoming grandfather you are romancing)” said Sunita shaking his nose. β€œSee once your son gets married. You will be alone again. Why don’t we plan for a second child before your daughter in law enters this house” said Sanjay winking at her.
Ragini who was drinking water choked. β€œHo kya gaya hai tujhe aajkal. Why do you choke so much” asked Supriya caressing her hair. β€œHow will I know?” cried Ragini in between her struggle
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β€œSanjay… Stop it” said Sunita widening her eyes and shocked. She hit him playfully on his shoulder and headed out of the room.
β€œSuni please take your nalayak son today to Mandir. I have a early morning conference call today” screamed Sanjay heading out of the house. β€œHey Bhagvan. Now who will wake up this Kumbakaran” said Sunita worried. She headed to Raj’s room. β€œRaj beta uthna. See only for today take me to Kanha ji’s mandir. See your dad also went to office” said Sunita pleading Raj sitting beside him on the bed. β€œMaa please. So soon anybody gets up oh what? Please let me sleep” said Raj pulling his blanket. Sunita got annoyed. She got an idea and smirked. β€œHa ha. Sleep. My son has grown up na. Now he doesn’t need me and doesn’t love me at all. Now only you are avoiding me. After marriage tho you will forget me” said Sunita acting as if she is crying. β€œMaa please don’t start your emotional drama. Fine I’m getting up. Gosh grow up mom. Aren’t you tired of this emotional drama?” asked Raj getting up. β€œThat is the only thing works with you” said Sunita brushing his hair. β€œNow go get ready fast and come down. We are already late. We will miss aarti” said Sunita dragging him out of the bed and pushing him inside the washroom.
β€œLet’s leave mom” said Raj heading down the stairs from his room after getting ready. Sunita happily followed him.

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β€œThis is different Mandir na mom. You never came here before” said Raj when he stopped the car outside a Mandir. β€œBeta this is Kanha ji Mandir. My friend said here Arti is very special” said Sunita smiling. β€œWhatever. Get going your Kanha ji might be waiting” said Raj giving up. β€œYou also come beta” said Sunita. β€œNo thank you maa. You know I don’t like going to Mandir” said Raj waving his hands in air. β€œFine” said Sunita and got down from the car and headed to Mandir

β€œMan mohana…… Man mohana…….”
β€œArrey what a beautiful voice” said Sunita heading inside the Mandir after banging the bell. She was spell bound to the voice
Man Mohana Man mohana Kanha sunona aaa Tum bin paun kaise chaina
β€œAhh this phone. What happened to it Suddenly” said Raj inside his car. He came out to get the signal.
Man Mohana Man mohana Kanha sunona aaa Tum bin paun kaise chaina
His heart started beating very fast listening to the divine voice. He looked up at Mandir and lost himself in that beautiful voice. He moved towards the Mandir unknowingly. It seemed like his soul was waiting for this moment from ages. As he climbed the steps one by one like he is bound to some magic his heart beat was raising with excitement.

The cool air blew his hair and made his senses cool. He went and stood inside the Mandir folding his hands like he is hypnotized due to that beautiful voice. As the song finished. Sunita turned smiling and found Raj standing beside her smiling like a idiot and folding his hands. She couldn’t believe her eyes for what she saw. She shook Raj who was still not in his senses. She hit him hard on his shoulder and he came to real world. β€œOuch” said he and looked at Sunita who was looking at him with one eyebrow raised. Then he suddenly realized and dragged his hands back which were forming a namaste and looked at Sunita nervous. β€œYou know na I don’t like going to Mandir” said Sunita imitating him. β€œWo maa. I was just worried.

You did not come from long time na? You did not have your breakfast also yet so I… I was just worried ok” said Raj. β€œSo why did you folded your hands?” asked Sunita smirking. β€œWo…. Wo… I was not folding my hand. Haa It is so chill na that’s why I was just rubbing them” said Raj and tried escaping. β€œOhho is it?” said Sunita. β€œCome mom we are getting late. Otherwise your Khadoos husband will have to search a new for me” said Raj. β€œWait a minute” said Sunita and went to Pandit ji. β€œPandit ji. I’m new here. Can you please tell me who sang Arti today. I’m just curious, it was such beautiful voice” said Sunita. β€œAcha wo. Lado sang the arti song today.

She occassionally sings. It is good that you are new and you heard her voice” said Pandit smiling. β€œWhere is she?” asked Sunita curious. Pandit ji looked around but did not find Ragini. β€œMaa” screeched Raj standing beside her. β€œArrey Where did she go? Supriya ji? Where is your daughter?” asked Pandit ji as he spotted Supriya in the crowd. β€œArrey Pandit ji. Today is her first day in office so she was in a hurry so she went” said Supriya smiling. β€œYou need to tell her anything? Tell me I will convey it” said Supriya. β€œArrey she is new here and she hear Ladoo for the first time. So she just wanted to meet her” said Pandit ji. β€œLadoo” said Raj making weird face, Sunita glared him and he composed himself. β€œI will tell her ji. Next time you can meet her” said Supriya smiling. β€œOhhh that’s so sweet of you.

Thank you so much” said Sunita smiling. β€œArrey no need to say thanks and all” said Supriya nodding her head. β€œNamaste My name is Sunita Khurana and he is my son Rajbeer” said Sunita smiling. β€œNamaste Aunty” said Raj folding his hands in Namaste and bending a bit. β€œKush Raho beta” said Supriya caressing his hair. Raj felt an instant connection with her and smiled. He was confused why he was remembering the girl he met that day. He brushed his thoughts and smiled. β€œNamaste ji. My name is Supriya. We live here only nearby. Someday come home. Acha I will take your leave. I will meet you next time. Acha beta Namaste” said Supriya and bid them bye. β€œCan we leave now. I don’t know what my Janmdaata has thought a new name for me” said Raj and looked up. β€œBadmash” said Sunita hitting him on his shoulder playfully. He side hugged her and smiled. They headed back to home.

33 responses to “Nakchadi Ch 2 (SwaRagini)”

  1. Sreevijayan Avatar
    Sreevijayan

    Woaaahh…so already the eternal bond started huh? Hayeeeeee….dey r gona make a super cute pair….

    What an update my dear…m already in love wid dis ff….take care my rockstar…

    1. Sally_blr Avatar
      Sally_blr

      See I did not make you cry….

  2. smrithi Avatar
    smrithi

    Aaawwwwsssooommmeeeee……❀❀❀

    1. Sally_blr Avatar
      Sally_blr

      Thank you Smriti

  3. Sindhura Avatar
    Sindhura

    Awwsome

    1. Sally_blr Avatar
      Sally_blr

      Thank you Sindhu

  4. lovely Avatar
    lovely

    Amazing

    1. Sally_blr Avatar
      Sally_blr

      Thank you lovely

  5. Kutty Avatar
    Kutty

    Superb episode. So much fun nd happiness in Ragu’s life. All her Bhai’s are so cool nd funny.. Each time Raj parents speak of their DIL Ragu’s gets choking. Nice… Both of them are super cool. Loved this update. Take care

    1. Sally_blr Avatar
      Sally_blr

      Thank you da kutty

  6. dharani Avatar
    dharani

    awesome the chipkali scene is superb

    1. Sally_blr Avatar
      Sally_blr

      Thank you Dharani

  7. jazzy Avatar
    jazzy

    hahahahaah i love the xonnection whenever everyone talks abt bahu then the reaction is seen in ragini and always she is eating something and waiting for their face off again

    1. Sally_blr Avatar
      Sally_blr

      That drained all of my creativity. Glad u liked it jazzy

  8. abi Avatar
    abi

    Sorry dear I didn’t comment for your first part….
    It’s just awesome…
    Really interesting

    1. Sally_blr Avatar
      Sally_blr

      Ohho don’t be sorry Abi. Its ok I understand everyone have their own commitments. You read it whenever you r free no problem

  9. asra Avatar
    asra

    fabulous Sally dear….omg what a connection between ragini and their sasural…i loved it to core….ragini wake up scenes r osam dear….ragini s soooo cute….waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear….

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      Sally_blr

      Thank you Asru

  10. Asw Avatar
    Asw

    Always rocking yaar could u update guilt keep going

    1. Sally_blr Avatar
      Sally_blr

      Thank you dear.

  11. Fairy Avatar
    Fairy

    Hayyy Alllllah…..omg omg omg main kahi khushi se mar na jaoooo…..ragini wid karan tacker i mean raj….oh goddddd……hezzzzz one of my fav… ufff!!!!hahahhahaha m lovng it soooooo much……wowwww thnku sooooooooo much yr sallllly…..both of dem tejasswi n karan r my fav…. n seeing dem together as a couple oh goshhhh!!its such an amaznggg feeelng….thnx a lot yaaaar!!!!
    Now comng to chapppy….hayy!!rags brother r soooo naughty n helarious hahahha…n even i tooo scared lyk helll from chipkala oh sry sry i mean chipkalis hahahhahaha…dat gender vala part ws damnnn helarious yaaaar..dat cosmic connection of rags wid her in laws ws sooo superbbbb ..kaha se aata h tujhe ye sb unique unique idea yaaar!!!!!!

    Salllly ufff tareeeef karu kya uske jisne tujhe banaya…hay Allah u r such such such a blessssed writtter yr…again hattts off to u….n v r sooooo lucky to hve u wid us…..
    ???????love u sooo much sweeety…keeep rockng n stay blesssed dr..post nxt part soooon πŸ˜‰

    1. Fairy Avatar
      Fairy

      N one last thing i forgot to tell u …dat title ws damnnnnn fantastic πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ jst loved it yaaar πŸ˜‰

    2. Sally_blr Avatar
      Sally_blr

      Haay Allah. I’m just dancing reading your comment. Thanks a ton sweet heart for such beautiful comment

  12. Akshata Avatar
    Akshata

    ragini’s family is full of life and all family members are dramebaaz. oh so there is a cosmic connection in between ragbeer. awesome update

    1. Sally_blr Avatar
      Sally_blr

      Thank you Akshata

  13. A.xx Avatar
    A.xx

    Fab lived it so post soon xx

    1. Sally_blr Avatar
      Sally_blr

      Thank you dear

  14. Ragz_teju Avatar
    Ragz_teju

    its dam amazing… in your ff’s I admire the bonding between relations dear… keep rocking.. love you for giving us such wonderful ff

    1. Sally_blr Avatar
      Sally_blr

      Thank you Ragzee

  15. Shambhavi Avatar
    Shambhavi

    I love this.❀ Two crazy good-looking leads. Amazing families. Kismet connection. What more does a fanfic need!
    It’s happy and just perfect. Exactly what I expected from you, Sally.
    You just manage to touch my heart every single time, don’t you???
    All my love and positive vibes to you,
    Sham. <3

    1. Sally_blr Avatar
      Sally_blr

      Thank you so much sweety. Thank you for your immense love.

  16. Vk Avatar
    Vk

    Awesome

    1. Sally_blr Avatar
      Sally_blr

      Thank you dear