Hi guys, I am Bela. I normally just comment on other ffs. This is the first time I am writing an ff. I am a jabra Ragini fan. Her character was mercilessly butchered by the CVS. This ff of mine is my take on what all happened. This is going to be a short ff.
Promo 1:
She was drowning. All around her, she could see water. She knew she would die but still she was unable to do anything. Her biggest shock was the betrayal she received. Ragini. Her baby sister. She couldn’t for the life of her understand what happened to her. Her Ragini was so sweet. She was the one who convinced Swara to act on her feelings and marry Lakshya. And now……..she pushed her into the river saying she loves Lakshya. WTH? She could feel her eyes closing as her head bumped into a rock. As her eyes closed, she could see only one person. Her love. Her confidant. Her enemy. Her sister. Ragini.
Promo 2:
He was running. Running fast and searching for her. When Ragini had come and told her bunch if lies, he hasn’t believed a single word. Why would Swara leave Lakshya? It was definitely Ragini’s plan. He had warned her not to continue this. But she had refused. And now, Swara was missing. Oh God! Had Ragini done something to her? He couldn’t imagine his friend doing this. They had been in college together. She was his junior. Such a sweet girl. And now she was a Monster. He closed his eyes. He pictured Ragini when they were in college together and her face when she exposed him in front of everyone. His friend. His confidant. His new enemy. Ragini.
Promo 3:
He couldn’t believe it. Swara left him. She left him on their wedding day. Granted, he didn’t love her, he just liked her. But he wanted her to be his life partner. And she betrayed him. Took drugs and went off as a hippie. And hishis dear brother Sanskaar. He had been shocked when Ragini had exposed him. He had felt like slapping him. His own brother betraying him. And now……….Ragini! She was going to be his wife now. Even after Shomi aunty and dida slapped her and accused her, he couldn’t believe them. She was such a pure soul. She loved Swara so much. Why would she hurt her? They were trying to cover up for Swara for sure. He closed his eyes. He could see Ragini’s tear stricken face when Swara’s video was shown and when Dida slapped her. She couldn’t be wrong. She was his best friend. No, she couldn’t betray him. She was neither Swara nor Sanskaar. She was his friend. His confidant. His soon to be wife. Ragini.
Promo 4:
Her plan had succeeded. In 5 minutes, she would be Mrs. Ragini Lakshya Maheshwari. Her plan had worked flawlessly except for a few glitches. But she was getting what she wanted. Her only regret was having to push Swara in the river. She didn’t want to do that. After all, Shona was her sister. But it had to happen. Otherwise, how would she marry Lakshya. She saw her nightstand. A picture of Swara and her was standing proudly. Ragini closed her eyes. What had she become? A monster. Evil. But that was who she was. A rejected girl. Lonely. Overshadowed. Ragini.
Please tell me should I continue?
42 responses to “Raglak ff- Tu Ki Jaane Pyaar Mera(intro)”
This was awsm. I m also a jabra ragini fan??
Well l know physiology a little . So l take her pushing swara in water as a step when we see no other option to get what we want. Though we regret and have guilt of doing it but then our obsession don’t leave us.
Thank you so much for your support Amna. Aren’t you the author of Ye laal ishq ye malaal ishq? I loved it. Keep reading to find out what happens!
Hey Bela! I need to to tell you that the way you write is amazing. The way you portray the feelings and point of views.. It’s superb! I loved it. There is no doubt whether you should continue it or not? Of course you should. ? Keep writing!
Hope Swara gets saved and Ragini turns positive.
Have a nice day! ??
Alisha thank you soooooooo much!
It means a lot. Swara won’t die and about Ragini…….hmm let’s see 😀
Awww too awsm promo plzzzzzz continue it
Megha are you the author of This time forever and Rishtey? If yes, my dear I am your jabra fan. I absolutely love your style. Please update soon. Thank you so much for your support. Keep reading!
Awesome.
Thank you dhara. Keep reading!
Bela.. pls continue… we are ragini fans after all
Nitu…..Arjun Ki yaar aa rahi h. Usko mere pass bhej do. 😛
I am going to continue. And I LOVE Ragini. We are Raginiaholics 😀
Nyc. Continue
Thanks Shreya. Keep reading!
raglak story so you must continue
Lovely, I am a big fan of yours. Thank you so much for your support. Keep reading!
Great start, you perfectly describes everyone’s POV. Do continue because I can’t wait to read more ?
Fats……thanks yaar. It is so flattering. I am going to continue. Keep reading!
Do continue it seems interesting 🙂
Dafsi……I am a fan of your work. Thank you for your support and keep reading!
me to ragini is fan next part
Hum Ragini ke deewane :3
Thanks for reading!
Hai bela..i am also a die heart ragini(teju) fan and your introduction was mind blowing..plz continue dear iam waiting 4 it
Neha…….thank you SO much. I will definitely update ASAP. Keep reading!
yaar i m also a die heart fan of ragini/tejaswi…i jst lovedddddd hr…i too feel really bad dat wt cvs had done to hr charecter….
wtng for ur update…it seemssss to b awesome…all d very bst dear….keep rockng.. 🙂
Yes fairy. They didn’t even show a proper redemption track. Even the Raglak second marriage was a shabby affair. Thank you so much for your support. I am going to change the naksha of the entire serial here. Keep reading!
I am also a GIGANTIC Ragini fan. Please continue but make Swaragini together, not Swara and Ragini
Hey Priya. Although I will try to show the cosmic connection between Raglak, I do plan on showing the love between Swaragini even when they are fighting. Keep reading and thank you.
ragini fan
We are as crazy about Ragini as she is about Lakshya 😛
Thank you for reading Lisa.
its so interesting. you have written each and everything so beautifully. love ragini……
Thank you Akshata….thanks for the compliments. Yes, I plan to show Ragini as Ragini was before the CVs did a complete U-turn on her character. I may add elements of my own. Keep reading!
Interesting dear and plz continue. I’m also a ragini fan
Ammu…….thank you so much. Everyone is a Ragini fan! 😀
Keep reading.
Awesome start. I have started liking ur ff in ur first episode itself. Waiting eagerly for next episode ☺
Prateeksha……I am fangirling right now 😀
Thank you so much for your comment. I hope I will be able to do justice to you choice
Keep reading
Like the way you write. Nice update!!!
Sindhuja……..I like your OS. Thank you for the compliment and keep reading!
Awesome. Even m a big ragini fan. Loved the intro. But m but confused r u gonna show ragini’s character with grey shades. Plz don’t do that.
Thank you Nami for liking the intro. Ragini in my ff is going to be my dream Ragini with a lot of shades. Let’s see……..keep reading!
Think v ill get to read wat v wanted to c in serial as a ragini fan…cntnu dr
Thank you SO much for your comment s Priya. Yes. Maybe this is the Raglak story we all wanted. At least I wanted. Ragini is going to be just awesome! Keep reading!
Superb yr.. Plz continue u have displayed all their emotions very well amazing
Ruhani……thank you soooo much for tour complimentm I am flattered. I will try my best. Keep reading!